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Highlander’s Twin Flame – Extended Epilogue

 

Domnhall made his rounds through the newly built village with pride filling his heart as children played in the fields, some of them running up to him and others standing by shyly. The clan had expanded again, with their population increasing, he had needed to build another village to accommodate them. The adults greeted him as he passed, they were busy going about their daily life, with the men coming home with rabbits and birds for the night’s stew, and the women washing their clothes on washing stones outside the houses.

It had been four whole years since he had wedded Allie, and to show for it he had a prosperous clan, a happy marriage, and two sons: Riley and Rohan. Every year had been bliss, and he had been overjoyed when Allie had given him two boys at once. It had come as a surprise, but then again, they should have expected it as Allie was a twin after all. The twins did not look alike the way that Allie and Adamina had, with Riley looking more like his mother and Rohan taking after Domnhall. The only physical attributes they shared were their height and the color of their eyes, but their characters were very alike. They were both very sweet little boys who cared about their family.

The family in question was made up of himself, his sister, Allie and the boys. Stuart had left them to go to France in the same year that Allie had discovered that she was pregnant. If he had still been in the clan, or even anywhere in the Highlands, he would have stayed to see the twins. They were three years old and had just learned to walk, yet they were already so protective of each other and those that were around them. Due to their new hobby of walking around, Allie preferred to have them outside most of the time, instead of staying in the castle where they could break something or hurt themselves.

Each day was a muddy surprise of a captured frog or a rescued bird which had fallen after hurting its wing. They were compassionate and looked at the world with wonder in their big, hazel eyes.

Allie was a wonderful wife and Lady. When he had been trying to court the young ladies of the Highlands in search of a wife, he had not been optimistic about being lucky enough to marry for love. However, life had found a way to surprise him. Each day was beautiful to him, an opportunity to feel even more love than they had before. When she had been pregnant with the twins, he got to see a more irritable side of her, but he only found it amusing and not difficult. He had been married to Adamina who was not pregnant, but just purposely did her best to make things difficult and be vile.

To him Allie’s behavior was adorable and, in some instances, hilarious. He knew better than to laugh, however, because the one time that he did not hold in his amusement, she had burst into tears. He was glad that he never got to experience what a pregnant Adamina was like. Instead of asking for pie in the middle of the night, she might have demanded a war with all the neighboring clans instead.

He and Allie had both changed a lot over the years. She had gotten rounder after her pregnancy, her curves filling out nicely. Her hands were softer and had less ridges since she no longer did manual labor and took care of herself more. Her skin had gotten fairer too, as she no longer had reason to be out in the sun too long. She had also taken to tying her hair back in a ponytail, something she learned to do because otherwise the boys would pull out all her hair when they tried to play with it. It had become a habit now after the time when Riley had snatched several strands of her hair right from the roots, bringing tears to her eyes.

He too had changed; he had added some extra weight to go with the age of being in his prime, but he exercised with the men every day to make sure that he kept in shape and could still draw her gaze when he was shirtless in the sun. His hair was longer now as well, and unlike Allie he did not tie it back, sometimes teasing Allie about how he had more luscious hair than she did, and she would retort that the boys would snatch him bald one day. He instead played a game with the boys to see if he could unclench their fists from around the strands of his hair before they could rip them off his head.

As he walked through the village, he could not help but wish that he had brought them with him. The air was light, and he could smell the nearby river as well as the faint smell of smoke from someone who had started their cooking early. Allie would love to get out of the castle and see the place and he just knew that the boys would love to play around in the grass with the other children.

The newly built village made him remember the village that had been burned down during his run-in with Bruce, the Laird of the McAlfie clan. The village had been rebuilt very quickly and his people had been able to return to their lives, but thinking of that time was still rather difficult as a lot of things had happened. They all tried to look back at the past with nothing but smiles, but not everything could be smiled about.

It was because he remembered all the pain that Bruce had caused so vividly that he was uneasy with the news that he had gotten the month before. It seemed that Bruce was gathering support from the English for the McAlfie clan, and although he did not do anything else than build business relations for the prosperity of his clan, Domnhall was worried.

He had made a promise to Bruce that the next time he attempted to harm him or his clan would be the last, but Bruce, despite being defeated, had stubbornly refused to back down, claiming that he would get his revenge one day. It was because of this that Domnhall could not help but feel restless. The English were a formidable lot. If they were incited by Bruce to bring a fight to him, who would he call on to help him fight? None of the Lairds would want to risk themselves like that.

The Buchan lands were prosperous and McAlfie had eyes on them for several years, even before Domnhall was born. For Bruce, however, it had become more than a feud over lands, it was personal, and the lands were an excuse at most. He hoped each day that Bruce was just becoming less petty and more mature as he continued to get news of his alliances without there being an attack on his land, but his gut told him that he was most likely wrong.

If he fell behind and ended up with less advantages and strength, he knew that Bruce would attack him. It was because of this that when he got a letter from a Lord in England whom he had done business with once before when his father was still alive, he had been excited. However, the contents of the letter had only given him another thing to be troubled about.

He walked past a tree and balked to find Elspeth sitting there, singing calmly to the little girl curled up beside her. He was rather startled to find her there as he had not come with her, but then again, his sister loved the people and was usually in their midst. He let out a heavy sigh. She was another person that made him worry, but for a completely different reason.

His sister was twenty-four now, ripe for marriage and should have begun entertaining suitors, but she had no interest. He knew that four years ago she had been a victim of his first wife’s abuse several times in the presence of her suitors. After that she had stopped entertaining suitors at all. He had let her be, thinking that she was going to be fine as she was still young, but four years had passed, and nothing had changed yet.

He wanted to make her choose for herself without him giving her a push in the direction he wanted. He thought about the letter from the English Lord again. It had reached him a week ago, but he still was not sure how to respond. The Lord wanted an alliance and remembering Domnhall from when he had done business with his father, thought the best way to make it happen was for there to be marriage between his sister and the Lord’s son.

If he was being honest, it was God sent. He had just begun to worry about getting her to marry and settle down, and with Bruce acting up again, it came at a time when he really needed it. He had been wanting to have the conversation with her for a while, but he had worried that she would be too upset, especially since it meant that she would need to leave the clan and go all the way to England.

She glanced up then, noticing him standing and watching her and her face lit up with joy. She waved at him, motioning that he should join her. He almost felt guilty, knowing that if she knew what he was thinking, she would have been less enthusiastic to greet him. Looking around he sighed. There was no better time than the present to tell her.

He steeled himself as he headed for his sister. Elspeth had to marry as soon as possible.

 


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  • The ending,In its way, a very gentle story like an adult fairytale. Most people at there best in times of crisis. Full of hope.

  • Fantastic.Highlanders Twin Flame should have given the hint away.Great twists and turns in this truly brilliant story.Now wait for the next.

  • Whew! What an unexpected adventure full of ups, downs, and unexpected surprises. Allie and Domnhall fill the void in each other as one beating heart. Loved this tale. Can’t wait for lovely Elspeth’s chance for happiness.

  • I Loved the storyline from the first sentence to the last sentence. Memorable characters with a few twists and surprises.

  • This was one of the best novels I have read. It was full of exciting events and kept you in your toes thru the whole story. I loved the romance but most of all I loved that it kept my interest thru the whole story. Bravo!!

  • Enjoyed the extended epilogue. Happy to see a little of their future. Can’t wait to find out what happens with Elspeth and her possible betrothal.

  • What lovely books, really enjoyed the main one and this epilogue. Really found it so easy to like the characters and get involved with them. Thank you so much for the stories.

  • I really liked Highlander’s Twin-Flame. Most all the characters were great except for Adamina who was so hateful. (That is until the end when I actually felt sorry for her!! ) I am looking forward to finding how Esperth’s life will turn out.

  • A really wonderful story! I loved this book sad at times and happy at times! I want to know what happens next with Elspeth! I loved Twin Flame!

  • Truly enjoyed reading this book. Loved the story about how Allie and Domnhall found love together. Two beautiful people. Enjoyed all the ups and downs in all the characters’ lives. Look forward to seeing what happens in Elspeth’s life. Hope it’s soon.

  • I always love your books. I cannot put them down. The sadness of one sister as compared to the happiness of the other sister was eye opening. I look forward to your next book.

  • THE EPILOGUE was a cliff-hanger, for sure. But I wanted to bring up something I noticed about your book. Namely GRAMMER! I get frustrated with misspellings and confusing ‘he with ‘she’ or ‘their’ and ‘there’ and many others. But this was such a pleasure to read. Congratulations! A very fine story and nothing to mar it.

  • Loved this book. Such a rough time for the border folk and the constant disputes and outright wars fought over land rights . And the occasional affairs and few actual marriages between Scots and English really created chaos!

  • I loved this book. The twist of them being sisters was great! I am looking forward to reading your next book. Thanks for the hours of enjoyment!

  • I loved the book, it was a truly an interestingly story and very well written. I have told my sister and friends about it and they want to read it also. I sent them the title an author. They loved it.

    M

      • I agree with the other ladies, that was terrible of you to end like that and not even give of a title for Elspeth’s book. Best epilogue I’ve read in awhile you should offer lessons to other authors. They could learn a lot from you. In hopes of finding Elspeth’s story.

  • I agree, that was terrible of you to end like that and not even give of a title for Elspeth’s book. Best epilogue I read in awhile you should offer lessons to other authors. They could learn a lot from you. In hopes of finding Elspeth’s story.

  • I loved this story. It just kept me in suspense as I read more and more. I couldn’t put it down so I was up most of the night reading until I finished the book. Donna please keep up the good work. I read t h e epilogue and t h eextended epilogue. The extended epilogue left me guessing what will happen to Elsipeth as she is almost past marrigable age.

  • I loved this book and how one sister could be so mean and the other so kind. I like to think of scorned as big and brawny. You do a wonderful job in making the imagination come to life. Please don’t ever stop. Thank you

  • Didn’t want it to end. What have we to look fwd to in the next book? What happens to Elspeth?

  • Loved the book. Enjoyed the interesting characters and all the intrigue…What a perfect couple they made…Kept me turning pages until the end. Looking forward to reading Elsbeth’s story!!!

  • Very good book couldn’t put it down but now you left us hanging about what happens with Elsbeth

  • A real good read with several unexpected twists. I enjoyed the book and am curious if Elspeth’s future will be forthcoming…….

  • Absolutely a very good book. The way the characters were intertwined, good. Romance, very good. Very nice job!!! Kept me in suspense!!! Thanks for your book!!! Keep up the good work!!

  • I truly loved the book and the story line. Can’t wait to know what happens with Elspeth.

  • Oh – you didn’t finish the extended epilogue. What a tease!! I Just loved this story. There was so much excitement, I could not put this book down. Such romance between two people can make one only wish for it to never end.

  • Intriguing story with several surprises. I read the book in one day. It had several twist and turns. It certainly played on one’s emotions. I’m sure the next book will be as exciting!

  • It was a great story would love to know what happens next with Elspeth and if she can love who she is and and learn to love someone too.

  • The characters were well developed as well as the story. I mean who can go through all of the things these people have gone through and still come out okay!! I think any reader of romance will love this book. Thank you for an interesting read!!

  • It;s not nice to leave the reader hanging. Please write a sequel telling us more of Elspeth and the twins.
    I believe your writing gets better with each of your books.
    I started reading Highlanders-twin-flame today and have put it down until I finished it.
    Kudos Shona. Loved it.

  • A most fascinating and thrilling story. The characters are outstanding and very interesting. I truly enjoyed this book and anyone that reads it will not put it down.
    Just want to know what happens to Elspeth?

  • A very enjoyable read, didn’t want to put it down. Looking forward to reading what happens next.

  • Oh Im thinking this is my favorite book of yours yet Shona. Absolutely loved it, dont stop writing I cannot wait for the next

    • Actually… Elspeth’s story “Highlander’s Quest of Desire” is out already my dear Eliza 😉

  • I absolutely loved your book. Started this morning and finished it tonight. Wonderful. Can’t wait for the next book. Blessings!!

  • I love your books – my mother came from Scotland when she was a girl so any story with a background of Scotland I just love. Keep them coming. Regards Margaret J.

  • Excellent storytelling, really good to get to know the characters and like them. Looking forward to the he next installment and how things work out for Elspeth. Well done Shona. X

  • I was so into this story I couldn’t put it down. I’m anxious to read about Elsbeth. Thanks for your great stories.

    • Thank you so much for your positive comment, dear Charlotte! I’m very glad my novel intrigued you to this extend!💜

  • Oh that’s not the end surely! What happened to Elspeth?
    Absolutely loving your books Shona. There are so many emotions when reading each one. I love them.

    • Thank you so much for your positive feedback, dear Patricia! I’m so glad you enjoyed this, and you can find out what happens to Elspeth on my sequel, Highlander’s Quest of Desire! 😉

  • I enjoyed the story very much. Especially the surprise reveal towards the end!
    The balance of frustrated love and threatening conflicts made for compelling reading. I read the entire book in one day when I was taking a “mental health” day for myself! Great therapy, indeed.

    • Thank you so much for your kind words, my dear Denelle! It means the world! I am so happy that you enjoyed the book as much as I did❤️ Happy Holidays!!!

  • Amazing story. It reminded me as a twist on “The Prince and the Pauper”. The final reveal was wonderful. I’m looking forward to the next tale to unfold.

  • I enjoyed this story of two women who met at a inn where one worked. Things began happening right away when they met. Adamina found serving girl looked just like her and wanted Allie to replace her as Lady of the Clan Bucannan with her husband she didn’t love and she was going to go to her first love, Laird Bruce McAlfie because she was forced to marry Laird Dromnhall Buccanan by her father wanting to get rid of her. Adamina didn’t know that Allie was her sister because they were given up by her parents when they were just born. Allie didn’t want to leave her job as maid and waitress at inn to do this and next morning, Adamina accused Allie of stealing her ring and she was arrested and waiting to be hung in few days at dungeon. Allie agreed to replace Adamina when she came to dungeon to see if she reconsidered her offer. Allie did agree to replace her and she started training her how she acted to everyone in a bossy, haughty way in the castle and wanted Allie to do same. Stuart her bodyguard would help Allie at the castle while Adamina went to Bruce’s Castle. Adamina was ill, coughing, said she would be fine and after they left, went to find Bruce and live with him. Meanwhile, Allie replaced Adamina in castle trying hard not to be hateful and bossy to everyone. That went against her nature to do be hateful, mean to everyone. Things happened, husband found out Allie wasn’t his wife after he fell in love with her, thinking she was a new personality, even after he found out that Bruce had his other wife Adamina, her engagement ring, wrote letter to Dromnhall to tell him, he had Adamina who came to him, leaving her husband for him. Good story. Thanks, Martha

    • Thank you for your honesty, dear Ann! I’m sorry to hear that you felt disappointed and I hope you’ll like my other stories much more! ❤️

  • I really enjoyed reading this book and was reluctant to put it down. I eagerly look forward to the continuation.

  • Absolutely loved this story, so very different to the ones I have read before. A magnificent storyline – incredibly well written, what more can I say – loved it, loved it, loved it !!

  • I loved this story. I look forward to reading more of her books. I recommend everyone read this story, I look forward to reading more of her books, KATIE

    • Thank you so much for your words, my beloved Evelyn! Your support means the world! ❤️Happy new year! I can’t give you any spoilers but I am sure you will be happy about Elspeth!

  • Whew! What an unexpected adventure full of ups and downs and surprises. Allie and Domnhall fill a void in each other. Loved this story.
    Can’t wait for Elspeth’s chance at love.

  • After I had begun reading this wonderful story I realised I’d read it some time ago. Though I couldn’t Stop myself from re reading it again.😀

    • Thank you so much for your kind words my dear Linda! Your support means the world and I am so glad you loved my book TWICE haha!

  • I always enjoy your wonderful.settings and your way with making such interesting and diverse characters. Don’t leave us hanging! We want to know what happens next!

    • Thank you my dear Lela you are so kind to me! I can’t wait to know your thoughts about what I have prepared for the future…

  • Wow! This story grabbed my attention from the start because it was so unusual. It even caused me to relate to my husband what was happening in the opening pages. I couldn’t help myself and ended up reading the whole story in one day. Thanks so much for this great book!!

    • Thank you so much for your comment my dear Laurie! I am glad you were able to identify with the story and that you read it all in one day! It warms my heart!

  • What an amazingly different story. So much feeling. So must hurt. An amazing story. Once again the author has shown her talent in spinning a tale. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this story.

    • Thank you so much for such a sweet comment my dear Diana! So glad you enjoyed this story! And thank you for all the support!

  • Domnhall and Allie have such a rocky start to a unbelievable future, story with a great story line. Shona also writes some great HOT scenes

    • hahaha your words are so kind dear Sue, thank you so much! Your support means the world!

  • Beautiful story. So full of life, challenges, love , the ever after! Thanks Ms Shona for this amazing & incredible read ! Loved the characters especially Allie & Domnhall. I just could not put the book down! Thanks for the extended epilogue that always brings a happy wholesome end to a fantastic journey in time!

    • Such a sweet comment dear Judette! Thank you so much for the support! I am glad you loved this story!

  • I have been enjoying reading Shona’s books mosty. This one at the end when Adamina was dieing & she asked to be forgiven for the evil she’d done, I thought she shouldn’t have been with all the emotionfrom her victims. No matter the upbringing a child has, it’s their basic personality that comes through in the end. Tha woman would have been evil no matter if she had been pampered as a child. There are many stories were the victim of a cruel parent in a rich house, ends up to be a nice person, just look at Cinderella.

    • Thank you for sharing your thoughts my dear Geraldine! I understand your perspective on Adamina’s character and her redemption arc. It’s always intriguing to hear how different readers interpret and feel about these moments. I appreciate your support and insights. ❤️

    • So glad you enjoyed it my dear Janice! 💕 I’m thrilled the excitement and romance hit the mark for you. Thanks for sharing your thoughts! ✨

    • I’m so glad to hear that you loved the story dear Donna! 😊 Your enthusiasm really makes my day.🤗 Thank you for sharing your excitement! 😄❤️

    • Thank you so much, my dear! 💖 I’m delighted to hear you enjoyed the read! The Highlands hold a special place in my heart, and I love sharing their beauty through my stories.📚

  • I enjoyed how life can kick you down only to make it better.I love how they found each other and settled thing before she died.

    • Thank you for your thoughtful words, my dear Mary! 💖 I’m so glad you enjoyed the journey of resilience and love.✨

  • I loved this story, how it began then developed into the special bond of Love. Thrilled to see the interactions of the women n the beautiful way it ended.

    • Thank you so much, my dear Margie! 😊 It’s always wonderful when the story resonates, especially with how it all comes together in the end. Your support means a lot! ❤️

    • Thank you so much, my dear Margie! I’m delighted you’re looking forward to it—I can’t wait for you to dive into the adventure! 📚💖✨

    • Thank you for your feedback, my dear Jenny! 💖 I’m so glad you enjoyed the storyline and the characters. I truly appreciate you pointing out the editing concerns—I’m always striving to improve. Your support means the world to me! 📚✨

  • I Totally enjoyed the story. When Allie found out she had a twin sister, I cried. It was sad but it was a touching ending. loved it.

    • Thank you so much, my dear Frances! 💖 I’m thrilled you enjoyed the story and that Allie’s discovery touched your heart. It means so much to know it resonated with you. Your kind words truly warm my heart! 📚✨

  • Loved the story and had a feeling that Allie was Adaminas twin. Would love to know what happened with Elspeth though

    • Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts dear! Finding out about your thoughts and feelings is always so interesting to me 🩷 As for Elspeth…stay tuned, as there might be more about her story in the future 👀📚

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